A story of a wolf

[Icestar]

This is a story about a wolf named Shentka.

Once upon a time there was a little wolf pup born on a full moon. He had 3 sisters, only 2 hated him. His name was Shentka.

"Shentka time for school." His mom yelled.
"Coming, mom." Shentka ran out of his room, picked up a piece of toast, and ran out the door, "Bye!"
"Bye."

"Well, here I am." Shentka looked at the lowest class school, where lower class wolves went to school. Shentka walked in. The school was a mess, wood here and there, paper everywhere, and floor boards sticking up everywhere. "What a mess!"
"Welcome, class. Here are your schedules."
Shentka took his "I have a class with an older grade! That's just perfect." Shentka sighed.

Shentka headed into the room. He saw one of his older sisters and groaned. He sat in a seat directly from his older sister. "Welcome class today we're having a review quiz to see what you remember from last year."
Shentka took his quiz, looked down at it and smiled. This should be easy He thought. Shentka took the quiz with pride, ignoring the notes his sister kept throwing at him.
"Well done, Shentka you're the only one with a hundred percent."
Shentka smiled while everyone else groaned.

It was time to go home. Shentka grabbed all his books and went home.
"Mom today was a great day."
"Why?"
"Every review quiz I got a hundred percent on."
"That's great, Shentka."

Years past and Shentka was now in the highest school you could possibly be in.
"Wow! This school's better than the one I was in a few years ago." Shentka noticed someone who looked like they were having trouble. He sat down. "You look like you're having trouble."
She looked up from her work. "Yes I'm having a lot of trouble." She sighed.
"What's your name?"
"My name's Niena. What's yours?"
"My names Shentka. How about after school I can help you with your work."
"OK. Thanks. No one wants to help me since I'm princess. They all think that I can do it on my own, but I can't. I'm not good at school."
"See you after school, then." Shentka waved bye and walked inside the school.
"Bye." Niena got up and walked into the school.
To be continued.

[Icestar]

So, what do you think of my story so far?

[kcb500]

Good

[Icestar]

Thanx ;D

[Icestar]

School was over. Shentka went out into the field and saw Niena sitting there trying to do her school work. "So, having trouble again."
"Yep."
"Well this is what you do."
Niena's Dad was watching her from behind a tree with his top lieutenant right beside him. "Once we get the chance that wolf is going down."
"Yes, sir." Niena's dad and the top lieutenant left.
"Thanks for helping me, Shentka see you tomorrow." Niena left.
"Bye." Shentka went to his den.

Shentka walked inside his den a little later. His den was full of shelves of books and a table in the middle. His bed was to the back of the den. "Home, sweet-"
"Hello, punk."
Shentka turned around and the top lieutenant was in the front of him. "H-Hello, sir." Shentka swallowed.
"Come outside, punk."
"OK."
Shentka and the lieutenant went outside
"From the king. I have been given an order since he saw you talking with his daughter."
"She needed help on her work that's all." Niena watched from the side of Shentka hollow.
"I got orders and I take the order."
The top lieutenant went in for the attack. Niena went stiff.
To be continued.

[Icestar]

What do you think of this part?

[kcb500]

Good

[Icestar]

Thanx again. ;D

[Icestar]

I'm going to finish it later.

[kcb500]

Alright

[garrett]

it's great

[Icestar]

Thanx. I pretty sure you wonder what's going to happen to Shentka, don't you?

[garrett]

yeah

[Icestar]

Well, I'll start writing the next part now.

[garrett]

ok