A story of a wolf

[Icestar]

The top lieutenant put a big gash right under Shentka lip. Shentka went in for attack and got the belly of the lieutenant. The lieutenant went down, but he wasn't dead. Niena was in even more shock.
"How could you!" Niena's dad walked right to Shentka. The top lieutenant got back. "Attacking my lieutenant."
"He attacked me first." Niena's dad didn't listen to Shentka.
"D-Dad it's true."
"Not now, Niena"
"I bane you, Shentka."
"No Dad you can't do that he's hurt. Look at his gash."
"Not now, Niena."
Shentka ran into the woods.
"Dad, you can't do that. When a wolf is hurt it has to go to the hospital den."
"He attacked the top lieutenant, so I baned him."
"Dad you can't do that." Niena ran away crying.
To be continued.

[Icestar]

So what do you think?

[kcb500]

Cool

[Icestar]

If the story wasn't so long it might be done by now.

[garrett]

it's great

[WildStar]

it really is

[Icestar]

I know. The story popped up in my mind and I felt like sharing it with everyone.

[WildStar]

cool

[Icestar]

Shentka walked through the woods. "I can't believe him! He baned me when the lieutenant attacked me first." Shentka ran into something. Who's there?"
"Please don't eat me, please don't eat me."
"Who are you?"
"I'm an owl, Mr. Wolf. My name is Tod."
"My name is Shentka and I wont eat you."
"That's a relief." Tod got off of the ground and went into flight
Shentka allowed Tod to go with him.
"Shentka?"
"Yes." Shentka was tired of answering questions.
"Where are we going?"
"To my dad's clan."
To be continued.

[Icestar]

What do you think?

[kcb500]

I like the story so far

[Icestar]

I like my story so far too. Too bad after this part I'm a little lost. I have an idea, but I'm lost on where it fits in.

[WildStar]

thats too bad

[Icestar]

Ya.

[WildStar]

I know