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Post by Icestar on Aug 30, 2008 19:49:25 GMT -5
*sigh*
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Post by WildStar on Aug 30, 2008 19:50:52 GMT -5
Do you need any help?
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Post by Icestar on Aug 30, 2008 19:57:41 GMT -5
Yes, kind of, maybe. Well this is kind of how it goes, it's just brief, not to much like when I type it like a story. Shentka goes and visits his father, then goes back to his old clan, gets back in, becomes Niena's mate, and then comes the to be continued. How's that sound? Once it's time to type it, it'll sound more like a story.
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Post by WildStar on Aug 30, 2008 19:59:38 GMT -5
It's good but when you write the whole thing do you put what happens when he meets his father
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Post by Icestar on Aug 30, 2008 20:06:13 GMT -5
Yes I will and I'll put what happens when Niena's father finds him back in the clan, too.
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Post by WildStar on Aug 30, 2008 20:07:37 GMT -5
cool
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Post by Icestar on Aug 30, 2008 21:18:27 GMT -5
Yep.
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Post by Icestar on Aug 30, 2008 21:51:04 GMT -5
They finally made it to Shentka's father's clan. They walked to the outside of the den which Shentka's father lived in. Shentka walked inside with Tod following, "Hello."
"I don't-"
Shentka looked at him.
"Shentka?"
"Yes."
"Oh, it's you. So what do you want?"
"I was just hear to ask you how to get back into a clan you got kicked out of?"
"That's easy, son. All you do is sneak back into your den and then do everything you usually do."
"Thanks, dad. Bye!" Shentka ran out of his dad's den.
"Bye."
Shentka ran through the forest back to the outside of his den. "Home, sweet home." Shentka walked inside. Tod flew in and landed on a perch he found in the den.
Niena walked by crying.
"Niena?"
"Shentka? How did you get back in?"
"Well it's easy, I sneaked back in."
"Well, I'm glad to see you."
"And so am I." Niena's father walked in.
"Dad, were you following me?"
"No, I just knew he'd sneak back in."
"You can't bane me, I'm hurt."
"You're violating a rule, Dad."
"Fine, I'll let you stay."
"Guess what else, Dad?"
"What?"
"I get to choose my mate and guess who I choose."
"The top lieutenant?"
"No. I choose, Shentka."
Shentka stood there in shock.
To be continued.
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Post by Icestar on Aug 31, 2008 10:41:21 GMT -5
So how's this?
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Post by WildStar on Aug 31, 2008 10:57:35 GMT -5
Good
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Post by Icestar on Aug 31, 2008 15:23:44 GMT -5
Thanks, I wish more people would read my story. *sigh*
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Post by WildStar on Aug 31, 2008 16:20:48 GMT -5
I think almost everybody has read it
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Post by Icestar on Aug 31, 2008 16:25:02 GMT -5
Really! I hope so since it is a really good story.
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Post by WildStar on Aug 31, 2008 16:25:55 GMT -5
I can't wait till the next part
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Post by Icestar on Aug 31, 2008 16:28:25 GMT -5
Well, I'll be writing it later. Right now I'm trying to think of what happens next.
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